Wednesday, January 19, 2011

the pearl

my final thoughts on the pearl I thick the pearl is an okay story. But the way the story ended was kind of weird how the guy with the rifle thought that coyoto was a coyote and he shot him then kino looked into the pearl and saw him and his family dieing in the cave. then they killed the rifel man and took his rifle.

Then at the very end of the story he throws the pearl as far as he could and saw it sink to the bottom. The reason he threw the peal is of all the bad things the pearl has done to them.

1 comment:

  1. While you made some good connections between your thoughts and specifics from the story, the spelling and grammar errors took attention away from what you were saying. You might want to revisit this post and make some corrections. For example, the first word in a sentence is always capitalized.

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