Canada’s health care is different then ours because the health care in Canada is free which in our country you have to pay for the health care but it is better. Our you can pay for the health care in Canada and get better health care then when you don’t pay for it. Also in Canada a health card is issued to the people that get health care. For the free health care the hand out and the regular health care there are no deductibles.
I didn't really find a thesis statement.
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ReplyDeleteTheres no thesis. And this is last years!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good topic that people generally have a strong opinion on. Consider what your thesis statement is, though. Think of a statement as a question you spend the rest of your essay answering. Why should America have free health care, for example. Or, Are the benefits of free health care worth the price of its lower quality? Show as well what your opinion on the topic is.
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