Deep water

The story deep water was a good story because it teaches a life lessen that if you can't swim learn how to before you go into the water. You also shouldn't go into the water if you are unsupervised by an adult. This relates to me because of the time I went into the pool without my mom but luckily there was a life guard near by to watch and then it happened I went in the deep end and went under water I was panicking and almost drowned.

When I first read this story I thought holly cow this really happened to a kid. But the author did do a good job writing the story. But the part when the kid threw him in was just flat out mean I mean seriously what kind of jerk would do something like that. My favorite part of the story is when he concurs his fears and swims the entire lake. This relates to me when I am playing hockey like when we played our other B team for the first time and we tide 2,2 we were so upset. Then the second time we played them I scored two goals and my friends scored the other 2 and the other b team only scored 1.

In the story deep water the author that the water incident happened to him I like the confidence he should after he was dunked. He buckled down and conquered his fears so he could get his confidence back and start to swim again. He worked so hard to swim again and in the beginning his legs felt nom and lifeless so the trainer attached a rope to him and let him bounce against the side of the pool.


In conclusion the story deep water was an okay story considering the fact that it is true. The best part in the story is when he trans with the trainer and swims the lake.